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Tuesday, 31 January 2012

Peer Assessment of Storyboards

MY peers thought that i needed a bigger variation of shots in my story, however i thought differently as the shots a specific to that of a chase and there would be no point in closing up on a man in a balaclava , however i could throw one in for the runner. Also i thought differently about the dialogue as there is not much talking in a chase between this genre of character.

ALso it came to my attention that my story was not obvious enough, i kept it very concealed the why of the chase however i need to add a shot of the grave in to make it more obvious why the chase us taking place.

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